The first course was a practise so we could practise our putting and aiming, and I practised a lot of times so I could hit the ball in one go if I go to different courses.
After the practise course we went to the first challenge, it was very hard because the hole was very far away. My sister and I tried to aim it right into the hole but we kept on missing. On the last putt we finished the challenge with big smiles and and feeling proud of ourselves.
Then we went on the second golf course and it was harder because it had graveyards blocking the way to the hole. My sister and I tried 10 times and on the last putt we did it and we did a boogie to celebrate.
Next we went to the third golf course and it was way harder because it was in a pirate ship. It had a lot of barrels blocking the hole but I finished in 3 goes by focusing were the ball might go. I waited for my sister to finish and she did it in 2 goes.
After that we crossed the bridge and went to the fourth golf course but we had to be careful because there was a big hole that had a strong river flow but we handled it by going in front of the river flow. I did it in one easy go, same as my sister. My sister and I were very proud of our selves, so we just said, "Yes."
Finally we went to the last course. It was on a hill. When we hit the ball it rolled to the bottom of the hill and rolled into the hole, my sister and I did it in 2 putts. But the hole was a pipe that leads to the Pirate's course centre. When we went to the Pirate's course centre the man said that we had a draw so we boogied again to our car.
I love Pirate's course. I wish we could do it again in one of our birthdays.
WALT: use descriptive language in my recount.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I use adjectives in my writing.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I use adjectives in my writing.
